Etiquette · Lesson 18 of 21 · 12 min
Emails and letters that impress
University applications, internships and scholarships often begin with an email. A clear, polite email opens doors; a careless one closes them.
The essentials
- Use a clear, specific subject line: 'Question on Assignment 3, CHEM 1040' or 'Application query: BSc Economics, ref 12345'.
- Use a sensible email address, ideally your school or university one. Not 'princessofdubai2008@'.
- Open formally: 'Dear Professor Al Hashimi' or 'Dear Admissions Team'. Never 'Hey'.
- Introduce yourself in one sentence: your name, school or course.
- Keep it short and clear: one main request, bullet points if there are several questions.
- Close with 'Many thanks' or 'Best wishes', then your full name. Avoid 'Thx'.
Sending and replying
- Proofread before sending, including the recipient's name.
- Never send an email when angry. Wait, overnight if needed.
- Reply within about one working day.
- Use 'Reply all' only when everyone needs your answer. Use BCC when emailing people who don't know each other.
- Give a professor at least one full working day before following up politely.
Writing to admissions offices
- Check the website and FAQs first; many questions are already answered.
- Include your full name, application reference number and the course.
- Put all your questions in one email.
- Write months before deadlines, not days.
Example email to a professor
- Subject: Question about office hours, ECON 101
- Dear Professor Smith,
- My name is Rania Al Mazrouei and I am in your Tuesday ECON 101 seminar. I would like to discuss the feedback on my first essay. Would it be possible to meet during your office hours on Thursday?
- Many thanks,
- Rania Al Mazrouei
Practise in real life
Tick each one off when you have done it.
- Set up a professional email address (first.last@) if you don't already have one.
- Draft an email to a university admissions office with one real question about a course you are interested in. Ask a parent or teacher to review it.
- Rewrite one of your recent casual emails to a teacher in the formal style from this lesson.
Remember
- Specific subject line.
- 'Dear' + title + surname.
- One sentence about who you are.
- Proofread; never send angry.
Check yourself
1. Which subject line is best for an email to a professor?
2. How should you open an email to a professor?
3. You are furious about a grade. When should you email?
4. What should an email to an admissions office include?
5. When is 'Reply all' appropriate?